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Self-publishing (2) Self Editing Skills for Self-publishers: Narrative Distances

12 October @ 10:00 - 11:30 BST

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In this second event our self-publishing series, join Louise Harnby as she talks through how to play with narrative distance and craft more readable prose. The session will explore:

  • Self-publishing: Honing skills and satisfying readers
  • What narrative distance is
  • The intersections with narrative style
  • Narrative distance as a continuum
  • Examples of shifts in narrative distance
  • 3 problems to watch out for
  • A narrative distance toolbox


This session will end with a Q&A. If you would like to send a question in advance, sjackson@societyofauthors.org  with ‘Self-Edit’ in the subject header.

Who is this workshop for?

This session is ideal for any commercial fiction author interested in self-publishing who wants to hone their self-editing skills, particularly those at the beginning of their writing journey.


What will this workshop cover?


  1. Why ‘suddenly’ interferes with immediacy?
  2. When action is intention?
  3. Filter words
  4. Uninspiring chapter endings
  5. Problematic speech tags
  6. Double tells in dialogue.
  7. Head-hopping
  8. Why overuse of adverbs can be cluttering?
  9. How to remove mundanity from dialogue
  10. Identifying expository character description
  11. Removing inconsistency by creating a style sheet


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The line-up

Louise Harnby – Fiction editor and proofreader


Louise Harnby is a fiction editor, author and trainer who specialises in line editing for independent crime, thriller and mystery writers. She is an Advanced Professional Member of the Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP), a Partner Member of ALLi and a co-host of The Editing Podcast.

Twitter: @LouiseHarnby | Website: harnby.co/fiction-editing  | Help for authors: harnby.co/writing-resources


Book your place using the registration form below.


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12 October
10:00 - 11:30 BST
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Sophia A Jackson